Book "War Beneath The Waves"

Read War Beneath the Waves, by Don Keith.  I was excited to read this World War II story of near-mutiny, commander failure, bravery, and heroism under the sea.  The writing was sloppy - several repeated phrases and sentences.  More glaringly, much of the writing was done in modern newspaper story - every sentence is a paragraph.  This is a great story of submariners, grit, and heroism.